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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:00

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Original von seventeen17
wie siehts eigentlich mit kommasetzung aus ? hast du die nur jetzt weggelassen wegen schnell tippen ?

unsere lehrerin meinte kommasetzung im englischen hat ja keine festen regeln und nur bei ganz langen sätzen is sowas notwendig, die machen das angeblich garnich so-bzw nur sehr selten.

@wicked: nur ma durchlesen wird ja nich zuviel verlangt sein, naja is ja jetz auch egal - liest nancy morgen ma durch, hat ja auch eng LK
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Wicked

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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:02

das du mit der nancy überhaupt noch was zu tun hast. naja egal. ist ja nicht der singleclub hier...
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:03

ich glaub nicht dass das forum dafür da is seine hausaufgaben kontrollieren oder gleich machen zu lassen
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:05

du hast englisch als LK ?



dann grenzen die eingeplanten 13-15 punkte aber schon an utopie ... :rolleyes:

ich meine auch dass es im englischen kommregeln gibt ... bei einigen sätzen fehlen auf jeden Fall noch welche, da du teilweise Nebensätze einschiebst und man den satz zweimal lesen muss um ihn zu verstehen ... mit komma wär das einfacher !
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:07

nein ich hab nur englisch gk.
na dann lassts halt bleiben,is ja gut. :rolleyes:
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:09

es sind doch genug hinweise gekommen ! die umzusetzen ist nur ne mordsarbeit, da du deinen text komplett umschreiben müsstest - hätte ich auch kein bock drauf, aber du hast halt nach Verbesserungsvorschlägen gefragt !
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:09

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Original von Wicked
du kannst ja gar nix! bekommst ja nicht mal ne tussi ins bett :auslach:
(jetzt weiß ich auchwarum)



man wicked is halt nich jeder so die üble ficksau wie du :D

aber bevor ich meine hausaufgaben mal vom ybc machen lass frag ich meine kleine schwester

"Es ist die gefürchtete schwedische Axt, die, von italienischer Hand poliert und geschliffen, geworfen mit der Kraft eines deutschen Vorzeigeathleten, Bäume spaltet, um den Wald zu lichten."
:so:
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:12

find halt voraqllem die argumentation ziemlich schlecht. aber auch sprachlich musste da noch n paar sachen ändernn.

zum beispiel sowas hier..
As I already said above I still have read some e-books. It is correct and was an interesting experience.
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:15

ich kapier irgendwie gar nicht was er mit "It is correct...." sagen will

"Es ist die gefürchtete schwedische Axt, die, von italienischer Hand poliert und geschliffen, geworfen mit der Kraft eines deutschen Vorzeigeathleten, Bäume spaltet, um den Wald zu lichten."
:so:
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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:25

ich probiers mal. hoffe ich bau nicht noch mehr fehler ein:

normalerweise heisst das on the one hand......on the other-->bei dir fehlt der erste teil

generally--->in general

It is similar to a real book in the fact of the content:versteh ich garnicht---> vielleicht it is similar to a real book considering the content....oder so

examply---> example

the directory or the page enumeration, but has the advantages of a digital media – for example the possibility of searching words--->macht alles keinen sinn?!?!??!

An e-book could be found for the first time in 1993, when the manual of a computer game was in the PDF-format.---->the first ebook was published in 1993, it was the manual of a computer game and in pdf-format.

As I already said above I still have read some e-books. It is correct and was an interesting experience. ---> i have had the pleasure to read some ebooks myself which was quite a nice experience(hm hört sich nicht toll an aber ist soweit glaube ich ganz ok)

in the internet and not in the printed--->on(?) the internt and not in printed

they were free----> for free

hab jetzt ne menge ausgelassen weils mir doch zuviel arbeit wird.

hier geht weiter till ---> until

Surely---> for sure

so jetzt hab ich keine lust mehr. so leid es mir tut aber gutes englisch ist das nicht.....auch wenn ichs nicht wirklich besser kann.

alex
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hätte der threadersteller keine titten würden die moralsheriffe und die spamtrooper hier ja schon wieder alarm schlagen.
mehr muss man nicht sagen. Ducati - Porn on two wheels



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Samstag, 3. März 2007, 22:38

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Original von the flying kIwI
so jetzt hab ich keine lust mehr. so leid es mir tut aber gutes englisch ist das nicht.....auch wenn ichs nicht wirklich besser kann.

alex

danke schonmal. hat ja den text wenigstens etwas verbessert und war mal jemand der konkret paar fehler genannt hat :-)

btw: selber name ;)
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Sonntag, 4. März 2007, 01:20

so,hab das ganze jetzt nochmal etwas überarbeitet,bessere redewendungen verarbeitet,etc.
aber seht selbst und sagt mal obs so besser ist, ob ihr zufrieden seid und ob ich das eine oder andere argument noch reinbringen sollte?!

Choose one section of questions and answer them extensively in one text.
c) Have you ever read a novel or story online, or an e-book? Do you think that this is going to be the future of reading?

My intention for choosing this topic is that I am interested in technical things in general, but especially in computers. o me it seems very interesting to catch a glimpse of the future and to have an outlook on the future. On the other hand I have already read some e-books and know something about them.
At first I want to give some information on e-books in general and the development of the e-book.
An e-book is a book in digital form. Concerning the content e-books are similar to real books - for example the directory and the pagination. But the advantage of digital media is for example the possibility of searching for specific words. The first e-book was published in 1993 - it was the manual of a computer game and in PDF-format. In 1999 to 2000 the first tries of real commercialization started. Nowadays especially professional literature is published in the digital form; there are approximately 1000 titles available.
As I already said above I still have read some e-books. I have had the pleasure to read some e-books myself which was quite a nice experience. I read these e-books because on the one hand they were only available on the internet and not in printed form and on the other hand they were for free. If I would have read these texts in a book, I would have been forced to buy them for much money. Because of the fact that these stories were not published because it is a really specific topic that should not be publicized I had to read the e-book and did not regret it until today, because they were very interesting books to read. Certainly it would have been easier to have a printed book, to have the possibility to read it in the evening before I go to sleep, but it was not very uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer either with something to eat beneath me and read the interesting book. When I got tired, I set a bookmark and was able to continue reading where I had stopped the day before. Usually if I read a book, I am too lazy to take a bookmark and I also think that I am clever enough to remember where I stopped. But often this is not the case and the next day I have to search for the right page very long. Asking me, this is really annoying and a minus for a printed book. I would read an e-book again at any time, if I was not able to purchase it cheaply in the printed form. In the first instance it is important for pupils to have access to a large amount of information without paying a lot of money. Since e-books are for free they are a good possibility for pupils to save some money but still get the same information. The only negative aspect is that it can be a little bit more exhausting to read a long text with hundreds of pages on the computer. Nevertheless it is possible to do something else while reading the e-book. You can for example visit a forum, listen to music and chat with other people while you are sitting in front of the computer and reading a book. If you are not able to do several things at the same time you can as well shut all other programs and disturbing things down so that you can read calmly. For me it is normal to cope with many tasks at the same time, but some friends of mine and relatives sometimes wonder how this is possible. They say that I will go insane, if I keep on doing it. But they also have to admit that it is really amazing that I am very good at things which have to do with the computer. That could be the reason why I am really interested in reading e-books, whereas my relatives and other people are not willing to read an e-book. Asking me they are not really adept at things that have to do with the computer. Because of this they are scared to encounter new things they do not know. For me an e-book is a reasonable invention with good perspectives but still some decisive objections. Nevertheless the printed book has some disadvantages, too. In my opinion e-books are just one out of many examples for digitalisation. Other examples are music on CD’s, movies on DVD or catalogues on the internet. It is a corollary to publish texts and other things in the digital media. But the DVD or the CD do not have any disadvantages, the e-book unfortunately has. Usually it is uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer and read a book. Normally you prefer to lie on the bed or sit on a couch while reading a book and enjoy the warm and cuddle feeling. With a notebook it is possible to do that, too, but it is still tiring for the eyes. They have to cope with glaring light and the noise of the ventilators could disturb the nice silence. You always have to scroll down in order to get to the next page and you cannot lie down. But in case you have to wear glasses you can as well enlarge the script. Furthermore you are able to search for text passages in particular without having to search through the whole book. Another positive aspect is that nowadays e-books are often for free. But you cannot take a notebook to the doctor and read it in the waiting room. Furthermore it is not possible to equip every student with a notebook to be able to read school lecture.
Asking me printed books still have some advantages today, but being smaller and more portable devices like handhelds are a step into the right direction. In some it could be reality that nearly every person is reading e-books. How wonderful would it be to share the texts with other users of e-book-devices and get a new virtual book for free. It would be possible, if the digital rights management allowed it. But this is another disadvantage - other people could define which books you are allowed to read and which are not. This could be a high risk for your personal freedom. But the e-book could be the future of reading, because it will be more necessary to save paper and valuable forests in future.
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Sonntag, 4. März 2007, 01:52

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Original von fragger123
Because of the fact that these stories were not published because it is a really specific topic that should not be publicized I had to read the e-book and did not regret it until today


Kann es sein, dass deine gelesenen eBooks die Porno-Geschichten bei eMule
und Co. waren/sind? So verstehe ich das... ;)

Zu dem Text: Die Lobpreisung ist ja schön und gut, nur denke ich persönlich
zunächst mal an illegale Kopien. Ein auf Papier gedrucktes Buch kannst du nicht
mal eben auf den Kopierer legen und irgendwem dann in die Hand drücken. Ein
eBook hast du in wenigen Sekunden verschickt. Das führt dazu, dass sich ein
paar Leute das Teil ähnlich wie bei iTunes kaufen, und andere es online stellen
wo es sich andere einfach so ziehen können. Dadurch bescheißt man den Autor,
der im Gegansatz zu irgendwelchen Musikern meist wirklich eine arme Sau ist.

Ansonsten: Sehr einfach formuliert. Angenehm um es mal eben zu überfliegen,
aber für gute Zensuren nicht unbedingt das Wahre. Vllt. gehe ich morgen, wenn
ich nicht mehr so müde bin, mal etwas detaillierter auf einzelne Passagen ein.
dazu sage ich nichts und verweise nur auf Cykos Signatur :D
Cyko hat Recht. Wie immer...
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Sonntag, 4. März 2007, 10:09

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Original von cyko
Dadurch bescheißt man den Autor,
der im Gegansatz zu irgendwelchen Musikern meist wirklich eine arme Sau ist.

das e-book wurde kostenlos vom autor veröffentlicht ;) war nen "tagebuch" von jemand, der von ner tour berichtet hat ~200 seiten, und davon gibts mehrere leute die sowas als pdf machen oder andres zeug auf 100seiten tippen und kostenlos veröffentlichen!
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Sonntag, 4. März 2007, 12:40

Choose one section of questions and answer them extensively in one text.
c) Have you ever read a novel or story online, or an e-book? Do you think that this is going to be the future of reading?

My intention for choosing this topic is that I am interested in technical things in general, but especially in computers. To me it seems very interesting to catch a glimpse of the future and to have an outlook into the future. On the other hand I have already read some e-books and know something about them.
At first I want to give some information on e-books in general and the development of the e-book.
An e-book is a book in digital form. Concerning the content e-books are similar to real books - for example the directory and the pagination. But the advantage of digital media is for example the possibility of searching for specific words. The first e-book was published in 1993 - it was the manual of a computer game and in PDF-format. In 1999 to 2000 the first tries of real commercialization started. Nowadays especially professional literature is published in the digital form; there are approximately 1000 titles available.
As I already said above, I have read some e-books in the past and it was quite a nice experience. I read these e-books because on the one hand they were only available on the internet and not in printed form and on the other hand they were for free. If I would have read these texts in a book, I would have been forced to buy them for much money. Because of the fact that these stories were not published because it is a really specific topic that should not be publicized I had to read the e-book and did not regret it until today, because they were very interesting books to read. Certainly it would have been easier to have a printed book, to have the possibility to read it in the evening before I go to sleep, but it was not very uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer either with something to eat besides me and read the interesting book. When I got tired, I set a bookmark and was able to continue reading where I had stopped the day before. Usually if I read a book, I am too lazy to take a bookmark and I also think that I am smart enough to remember where I stopped. But often this is not the case and the next day I have to search for the right page a long time until I find it. Asking me, this is really annoying and a minus for a printed book. I would read an e-book again at any time, if I was not able to purchase it cheaply in the printed form. In the first instance it is important for pupils to have access to a large amount of information without paying a lot of money. Since e-books are for free they are a great opportunity for students to save money, but still get a lot of information. The only negative aspect I found was that it can be a little bit more exhausting to read a long text with hundreds of pages on the computer. Nevertheless it is possible to do something else while reading the e-book. You can for example visit a forum, listen to music and chat with other people while you are sitting in front of the computer and reading a book. If you are not able to do several things at the same time you can as well shut all other programs and disturbing things down so that you can read calmly. For me it is normal to cope with many tasks at the same time, but some friends of mine and relatives sometimes wonder how this is possible. They say that I will go insane, if I keep on doing it. But they also have to admit that it is really amazing that I am very good at things which have to do with the computer. That could be the reason why I am really interested in reading e-books, whereas my relatives and other people are not willing to read an e-book. Asking me they are not really adept at things that have to do with the computer. Because of this they are scared to encounter new things they do not know. For me an e-book is a reasonable invention with good perspectives but still some decisive objections. Nevertheless the printed book has some disadvantages, too. In my opinion e-books are just one out of many examples for digitalisation. Other examples are music on CD’s, movies on DVD or catalogues on the internet. It is a corollary to publish texts and other things in the digital media. But the DVD or CD do not have any disadvantages, the e-book unfortunately has. Usually it is uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer and read a book. Normally you prefer to lie on the bed or sit on a couch while reading a book and enjoy the warm and cuddle feeling. With a notebook it is possible to do that, too, but it is still tiring for the eyes. They have to cope with glaring light and the noise of the ventilators could disturb the nice silence. You always have to scroll down in order to get to the next page and you cannot lie down. But in case you have to wear glasses you can as well enlarge the script. Furthermore you are able to search for text passages in particular without having to search through the whole book. Another positive aspect is that nowadays e-books are often for free. But you cannot take a notebook to the doctor and read it in the waiting room. Furthermore it is not possible to equip every student with a notebook to be able to read school lecture.
Asking me printed books still have some advantages today, but Handhelds being smaller and more portable devices than laptops are a step into the right direction. In a few years it could be reality that nearly every person is reading e-books. How wonderful would it be to share the texts with other users of e-book-devices and get a new virtual book for free. It would be possible, if the digital rights management allowed it. But this is another disadvantage - other people could define which books you are allowed to read and which are not. This could be a high risk for your personal freedom. But the e-book could be the future of reading, because it will be more necessary to save paper and valuable forests in future.




sind noch paar kleinigkeiten anders ;)
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